
December 19,2013 by
Russ Henneberry
Here’s the trick to funneling traffic off of the social web.
Write better headlines.
Sure, you need to be participating in conversations and engaging with customers, prospects and partners on social media.
But sites like Twitter and Facebook are an endless flow of information snippets, each with the life expectancy of a fruit fly. If your goal is to encourage a click from a social site to a landing page or a piece of content you will need to learn to write status updates that get clicks.
Consider this tweet from HubSpot…
Eight words and a link. HubSpot knows that this headline will get clicks to their webinar landing page. It makes a webinar offer with a promise to gain mastery of LinkedIn for marketing. It’s a good headline.
In this article, we’ll use examples from Twitter for two reasons:
Writing better headlines will get more clicks from social media, but that’s just the beginning.
Understanding the art and science of compelling headlines is a staple of digital marketing. It will improve your results in nearly every aspect of your marketing including,
Great headlines usually fall into one of the following categories:
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Smart marketing almost always incorporates social proof, the propensity for people to make choices based on the choices that other people make.
The more people making that choice and the more influential those people are, the more influential the social proof.
Consider these headlines,
Often, people will be more motivated to take action to avoid pain than gain a benefit.
Well crafted threat headlines, like the following, incorporate the promise that you’ll be able to protect yourself from a threat if you take action.
The easiest way to craft a headline is to simply state the benefit and make a promise that, if the person takes action, they will gain this benefit.
This tweet from KISSMetrics makes a simple promise that you will gain knowledge about getting sign-ups without a marketing budget.
You’ve got an understanding of the headline categories and the traffic you are getting from social media will increase exponentially if you apply these principles.
Here are three other ways you can improve your ability to drive action from your headlines.
This is a common mistake and it’s easy to correct.
Often I see tweets and other headlines that are statements. Remember that a good headline or tweet contains a promise that, if you click, the promise will be fulfilled.
In many cases, adding the words HOW TO to an existing headline will be a dramatic improvement which can turn a statement into a promise.
For example, here is a fantastic how-to tweet from a start-up software company called Bidsketch,

Remove the HOW TO from the tweet and it reads,
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This headline doesn’t make a promise, it makes a statement. Add the words HOW TO and you’ve got a promise, and a good headline.
One of the questions people will have when they read your headline is — how long will it take to fulfill the promise in the headline?
One way to improve your click through rate is to communicate some aspect of time in your headlines.
Take a look at this tweet from Hiten Shah,
Based on this headline, I don’t think this is going to be a quick read. If I don’t have the time, I’m unlikely to click on this link. On the other hand, if I’m looking for a thorough exploration of this subject, I’m going to click and get settled in for a lengthy piece of content.
Notice how different this tweet would communicate the aspect of time,
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This tweet gives me the sense that this will be a short, concise piece of content that I can consume in a few minutes.
Adding a layer of fascination to your tweets and other headlines can lead to huge increases in engagement.
The key is to tie a gain or threat to something that is seemingly unrelated. These headlines make a promise but also tease the reader with curiosity.
Here’s a great example from Jon Morrow,
Jon makes a relevant, traditional promise: boost conversion rate on a budget. But the addition of MacGyver to the headline adds a layer of fascination.
Unbounce applies the same fascination formula to this tweet,
One way to use these headline formulas is to simply copy and paste them verbatim, filling in the blanks to match your circumstances.
That’s ok if you’re just getting started. But a better and more powerful way is to print them and then study them. Read through each one, pausing to consider why the headline works.
When you do this you will begin to truly synthesize the fundamentals of writing great headlines. If you do this, you will find yourself accessing the swipe file less and less for inspiration.
Also, make it a part of your process to copy and paste good headlines into your swipe file. You’ll start to build up a headline swipe file full of inspiration for the next time you need a jumpstart writing a social media update, blog post title or sales letter headline.
Become a student of great headline formulas and all aspects of your digital marketing, including social media marketing, will improve.
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Russ Henneberry is the Editorial Director at Digital Marketer. He's worked on digital marketing projects for companies like CrazyEgg, Salesforce.com and Network Solutions. You can connect with Russ on Twitter, LinkedIn, or Google+.
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